I just think you have a gifted way of collecting your great ideas and imagination, and delivering them to the readers. Normally, I am a terrible reader who falls asleep after going over a couple of paragraphs, but yours captured my attention instantly. I can't wait to read the rest!
I loved this book, Zac. And that was before the graphics. I think you should consider updating more biblical stories into the 21st century. This is an exciting niche that no one else is filling, and you would do it quite well. It certainly makes the biblical stories much more real.
Zach, you are one of the most imaginative writers I know of (and please forgive the preposition ending). Fortunately, you are also a word smith so you are able to express that awesome imagination well. You are also logical and able to build a plot well. I know they say that logic is a male forte rather than female; an assumption I hotly dispute. But in your case it's true. I wish you the best in what is sure to be a fruitful writing career!Noel Harshman